Life of Debauchery with Harem of Goddesses

Chapter 57: Feedback - Volume 1

Hey guys, Indian Rake is here and now you have read volume 1 let's talk about how feel about certain things in the novel.

1. Your thoughts on MC, Karan, and what can I improve?

2. Your thoughts on plot and what can I improve?

3. Your thoughts on characters, your favorite ones and what can I improve?

4. Your thoughts on fight scenes and what can I improve?

5. Your thoughts on sex scenes and what can I improve/

6. And please comment on whatever topic you want to talk about. Want to ask question about some things? Then please do.

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